A ok read to pass the time. It's readable an grammar is ok. That's all though, the MC is dumb while not trying to change the story an just following the main cast. MC is justify by saying to make them stronger which MC is failing hard on. The whole premise is to change plot ending of MHA, doesn't mean you have to make main cast stronger. There are so many ways to make the ending different but MC does the dumbest way. For reference make the MC the strongest an the ending would naturally change.

I came looking for copper and I found trash

The sotry has a few grammar errors, it’s still 100% readable and most errores are typos. I like the character and how he grows during the story. The one guy who complain about the mc not having will power or motivation clearly had not read the chapters cause he dose grow as a character in the lates chapters. Its no master piece but I have enjoyed the story and constantly look for its updates.

I like it, although sometimes I feel like the story moves a little fast. Also, I find it strange that Momo doesn't get suspicious when she sees the syringes. keep up the good work

What the hell? Is he going to go through all this, be the paw of the old Mc wanting him to be happy, while he runs away non-stop, just for money? If he had so much capacity and willpower, he would have at least managed to get by in the original world. I dropped this shit, goodbye.

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