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Abditunz0
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2024-10-31 15:20

Hi! I’m Abditunz, and I genuinely admire your books—your storytelling is remarkable. If you're open to it, I'd love to exchange some tips that could help us both as writers. Let’s find a time to chat; I think it could lead to inspiring discussions. Excited to hear from you! Best, Abditunz

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kingchad420
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Abditunz0
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hey mate i'm not bot am real do you have any social media platforms so we can discuss futher

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kingchad420
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you have reviewed several book five star with same paragraph except the name and you expect me to not call you a bot. A bot is someone who lacks creativity and originality and can't think anything by itself. Like you.

Abditunz0:hey mate i'm not bot am real do you have any social media platforms so we can discuss futher
NinjaV2
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Haven't read a single line of your book, but bro you cooked him. Now I will read all 9 chapters, just for that.

kingchad420:you have reviewed several book five star with same paragraph except the name and you expect me to not call you a bot. A bot is someone who lacks creativity and originality and can't think anything by itself. Like you.
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NinjaV2
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So after reading 9 Chapters of the story, I have quite a few things to say. So first thing is that The author likes to tell and not to show some things. Which isn't bad per se, but saying he trained for 10 years, and we didn't see anything like that is disappointing.(Plus a 10-Year time skip without saying what happened to him.) Second, He has the Mission to change things, but really didn't change things for 15 years. He didn't try to find Toga or Twice to change something.) Third, He also double downed on saying he himself is making changes, but some chapters later ROB comes and said he makes it more difficult. Fourth, ROB coming back again and saying that he can choose who he can kick out from class 1-A is something he again didn't alone change, it was ROB again. Fifth, keeping Mineta and not the dude with tape in his Elbows is just wow. So all in all, he didn't change a thing, everything right now that was changed was ROB. Seventh, a Mother that names you Devil and treats you worse doesn't deserve Love or affection. ROB asked him who will be kicked out from Class 1-A, and him just being better didn't make change. Then he could not even do something and he still would be in class 1-A ROB said he wants a different Story, yet MC has changed nothing. Long story short, it has a lot of forced Plot and Plot holes. Yet, I ask all of you to read a few chapters to make yourself an own opinion. Author to you, read and maybe write down your Plot. Because right now, he didn't do anything. To all of you, have a good day and Night

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