It got potential, though the story pacing a little to fast. i hope you give pov to the village people so we can see how they met mc
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LIKEYeah I rushed this period a bit so he could have all his power quickly. I plan to go a lot slower when he leaves and explore the world. Did you want the pov of the Aranaras or the future pov of the people he will interacts with? The pov of the Aranaras will be a bit difficult since they are a bit weird in their thinking but I could try. Anyway, thank you for your review.
Hey author, will there be any romance? Just curious.