1_hate_Harem

i not gonna say much because still not enough chapter, but this is intresting. make me remember soul_caliburn fanfic, hope its not Harem thoo

one of the best dxd fanfic, i just hope it doesn't become harem. cus leo doesn't strike me as a person who like harem.

to be honest, i recommend not to do harem without understanding of the genre in the first place. harem is one of the most hardest genre to write, because not only you have to focus on mc development you also have to focus on all the girls in the harem without making them one dimensional. but if you still want harem i recommended having 2 or 3 girls so you dont become overwhelmed by the amounts of character you have to write.

yeah i know, but the author is a human and i see a lot of comment that say, add "character X into harem", so im confused.

hey, is it really gonna be a harem fanfic, cus i don't see harem tag anywhere

It got potential, though the story pacing a little to fast. i hope you give pov to the village people so we can see how they met mc

sound like a rapist

Double update?!!!!

yeahhhhh!!!!!

but a welcome one