Hey, it’s really good, you don’t make mistakes with the names so that’s a plus in my book, and can you please share the nome of the og or a link if possible

Started off great and had potential. MC was not overly OP nor a weakling. His actions up to Liyue were reasonable, and there was good comedy. However, Inazuma was absolutely garbage. The MC was always a pervert, but when he got to inazuma, they stopped being "funny" and became outright disgusting. The story also became purely about him going around, seducing female characters for no reason (and, in some cases, like Ei, just outright brainwashing her using the systems powers). Honestly, I tried putting up with it because many people told me that sumeru was good, but I can't take it anymore. The culmination was the mc forcing ayaka to wear extremely reveling attire under the excuse of "training clothes".

Well, we certainly have quite an interesting and fun story here.

Readable good fanfic , worth a try~

I found the fanfic to be simply phenomenal, there are no words to describe this masterpiece, there is a lot of comedy, and it is certainly a harem, but it is very well developed, it doesn't seem forced at all, except in some moments.

i love this story, one of the best about fatui

Of all the fan-fics that the author has been translating, if he asked me how many of them were Chinese fan-fics in a quiz, the only one I would know for sure is this one. Why? Well, let's just say that many Chinese fan-fic authors have a horrible habit of making the MC force women in one way or another to love and adore them - as was seen with Raiden Shogun here - when they don't know what to do to progress in romance. I remember a fic a few years ago where I read a HxH fan-fic, it was great, until the author literally gave a slavery system to the MC, where he could summon female characters. Honestly, I think this is SO shit. That's really my only criticism of the book, other than that it's really fun, and the translation is impeccable.

La historia es buena solo en liyue, luego la historia decae a los pocos capitulos de Inazuma por las acciones del protagonista, recomiendo leer solo liyue y luego abandonar la historia.

I'll be honest, I liked the story at first, but there is too much filler in almost every chapter, and scenes that make me feel ashamed, if you are able to bear what I am saying, go ahead