CALE_HENITSU

As long as it has Calypso, I'll accept anything, muahaha.

MUITO BOM, PARABÉNS, ESTOU ADORANDO CADA CAPÍTULO DESSA OBRA.

Ótima história, sua interação com calipso são sempre divertidas, são engraçadas e tem aquele tom meio romântico mas na medida certa, obrigado pelo capítulo.

Wow, the author is trying in every way to force a script where the "heroes" of this world don't even have the slightest chance against the invincible one. It's simply disgusting. Mark could just fly and devastate everything around him along with the sound guy, who coincidentally has the exact sound frequency that affects the Viltrumites. I don't know if the author knows this, but it's not just ordinary sound.

Yeah, I'm already tired of this. It's not even close to being 1% of Mark Sinister's personality; it's just the author's own personality, which is already quite disappointing.

Meu mano calipso é uma ótima ideia, antes eu estava muito focado apenas no mundo principal do protagonista, oque faria ela não combinar muito, mas a história vai se passar em vários outros universos, e ter alguém como ela além de ser extremamente benefício tanto pelo conhecimento que ela tem em magia, quanto no geral, e ela é bonita pra krl tbm, então voto pra ela ir com o mc.

Thanks for the chapter

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Leaving aside the protagonist's personality, it's a very enjoyable story to read, but he makes so many bad decisions that it becomes agonizing. I can't imagine an American teenager who has never played some kind of game, whether basic or not, where they have to allocate points or choose a class. The protagonist acts at all times like someone who has never had contact with technology in their life. I like how the author tries to humanize the character, showing that he has fears and insecurities, just like anyone else, but when this is rubbed in his face for more than 40 chapters in a row, it becomes unbearable; he stops seeming human and starts to look like a child throwing a tantrum over anything that goes even slightly wrong in their life. One point I really liked was the part about high school, where he made some friends and was acting like a normal human being. This was the most human part I've read so far because, unlike before, he wasn't crying and trembling for two entire chapters before making a simple decision to go right or left. His interaction with Alice was quite funny; I liked how the author wrote his thoughts and actions. The world-building is still in its early stages, so I can't say much about it; it's just Twilight canon at the moment. Well, that's it. That's my review so far. I'll probably change it depending on what happens in the story. I don't know where the author wants to take it, but I'll at least try to read it before editing here again. I recommend reading it; it's not a bad story, it's not amazing, but it's certainly not bad.

The story was really good and getting interesting, the interactions with other characters and everything, but now it's just boring and extremely slow. I know the author wants the chapters to be short but consistent, but this just makes everything very frustrating.