I really don’t understand Chinese fanfiction how can China in particular create fanfiction that is just generally worse then every other ones out there. Is there something I’m missing because it’s not like every Chinese person wants to write badly writen characters and stories that don’t really make sense.

The translator has done a really good job in translating this but the story is just straight garbage. There can never be a good fanfic but props the the translator and I hope he/she does well in translating future works cause your doing great so far, anyways enough talking cya to whoever’s reading this.✌️

I'm glad you didn't give up on this story, I really like it and I think it has great potential

I'm actually enjoying this a lot more than I expected.

4 stars for the translation, 5 stars for the speed. The rest are 1 star. Chapters are filled with MC's expositions, mostly basic factoids that are tedious read. The Lina substory is just bullshit ripoff and MC's decisions after that went full r3t4rd. Dialogues are horrendous when it's not about basic HxH factoid. Author went full Ching Chong with the interactions with nonstop face slapping from goons who have eyes but couldn't see Mt. Tai

Don't read it, it's a waste of time. Don't read it, it's a waste of time. Don't read it, it's a waste of time. Don't read it, it's a waste of time. Don't read it, it's a waste of time. Don't read it, it's a waste of time.

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started out decently but it just got worse. the story hardly even feels like hunter x hunter with every chapter. first there is a ridiculous hunter ranking system that makes no sense. there are disaster beasts that behave like cursed spirits which doesn't make much sense and every chapter seems to have paragraphs of straight info dump exposition repeatedly to pretty much no end and the fight scenes are just boring over all.

I'm writing this review as of chapter 275. Writing Quality: This is a translation, and it's only so so in terms of quality. I often see mistakes such as translating "Nen" as "Aura", or instead of writing "Gyo" the translator write "Focus", also there are the usual mistakes of confusing the pronouns of males and females and even names are often changed between chapters. Updating stability: Translating 2 chapters a day is very good, so 5 stars here. Story development: I would say it is a 4.2 Stars, the plot is okay but the flow is agonizingly slow in my opinion. Also the MC golden finger is very interesting and intriguing, making me anticipate what the MC is going to get next. Character design: Quite flawed as just like almost all Chinese fanfics, the MC acts as a kid although he's an adult transmigrator, till chapter 275 almost all his friends are 10-11 year old kids. And it's not like he needs to keep up a cover so he befriended those kids, according to the author they just honestly hit it off and they became friends. Now once or twice I can understand, but that is happening every few chapters with over half a dozen kids. World background: The author has expended on the HxH world quite good and took it further than what was showing the manga and anime.