Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.

Hi fellow author! I’ve really enjoyed seeing where you’ve taken this so far. Your story is absolutely captivating, and I’m eager to see what comes next. Seriously, don’t give up—I’m here to keep your spirits up! Not that you need it, but hey, good job! I’m loving every bit of it so far. Oh, and if you have a moment, could you check out my book? It’s a fantasy adventure titled Bellator: Rising. The story follows a hero’s journey in a world I’ve meticulously crafted from the ground up. You’ll discover a unique mana system, intriguing species, various countries, and rich cultures, each with their own religions and laws. This is my first book, and I’m genuinely eager to get some feedback. Whether you’re an experienced writer or just a fan of fantasy, your insights could really help me improve. I’m bracing myself for any critique, no matter how brutal, so let it rip! Your honest opinions would be invaluable. Thanks so much for considering giving it a read. Best, Ikaris P.S. Your feedback would mean the world to me!

It's a beautiful one for all action and sci-fi lovers. I love the book and recommend it for everyone. Frozen Flame at Dawn is a must read.

The story is awesome, it's well written and I can definitely recommend to others👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Alright, it's a good novel that I can suggest to others. The plot is good and interesting, and the characters are well-shaped. As for writing, it's all good, described well, with good grammar that is easy to understand, while reading the words my brain imagines the scene instantly. That's all, nothing says now, so just keep it up! I'll support your novel.

In this gripping narrative set in a desolate bunker, the detailed descriptions of the damp metallic smell, dim lighting, and outdated equipment create a tense and immersive atmosphere. The character Alex, depicted as tired and unshaven, adds depth and realism, making the reader feel the bleakness and urgency of the situation. This scene effectively sets up an engaging story filled with tension and drama

Review for the fp event. Good luck with your novel, ir appesrs in the event, it should be goodl

"Prepare to be captivated! This daring new novel brings epic adventures, dark apocalyptic challenges, and a thrilling journey from weakness to unstoppable strength. A masterpiece in the making!"

So, I read up to chapter 7 and these are my impressions about the story till now. The story begins in a post-apocalyptic kind of world with an alien invasion at fore, and a society that is bearing tremendous changes owning to that. Amira, is sent back to past to be a hope for survival. The preface was really well done. I just got instantly immersed in the narrative, and then the pace kept me reading it on. The characters and dialogues are really well written too. As well as the overall story pace; it builds up the right amount of tension with each new chapter and keeps you hooked up for the next development. I really enjoyed the action-packed exchanges, the tense background story and what I expect to be a long-drawn confrontation between the aliens, and other different human camps. A great read for sure!