Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.

Hi fellow author! I’ve really enjoyed seeing where you’ve taken this so far. Your story is absolutely captivating, and I’m eager to see what comes next. Seriously, don’t give up—I’m here to keep your spirits up! Not that you need it, but hey, good job! I’m loving every bit of it so far. Oh, and if you have a moment, could you check out my book? It’s a fantasy adventure titled Bellator: Rising. The story follows a hero’s journey in a world I’ve meticulously crafted from the ground up. You’ll discover a unique mana system, intriguing species, various countries, and rich cultures, each with their own religions and laws. This is my first book, and I’m genuinely eager to get some feedback. Whether you’re an experienced writer or just a fan of fantasy, your insights could really help me improve. I’m bracing myself for any critique, no matter how brutal, so let it rip! Your honest opinions would be invaluable. Thanks so much for considering giving it a read. Best, Ikaris P.S. Your feedback would mean the world to me!

Alright, it's a good novel that I can suggest to others. The plot is good and interesting, and the characters are well-shaped. As for writing, it's all good, described well, with good grammar that is easy to understand, while reading the words my brain imagines the scene instantly. That's all, nothing says now, so just keep it up! I'll support your novel.

It's a beautiful one for all action and sci-fi lovers. I love the book and recommend it for everyone. Frozen Flame at Dawn is a must read.

It's an intriguing story with well written characters. I highly recommend it.

Just your average reader helping a new rising Author🔥🔥🔥 P.S:Don't forget to support & motivate him❤️❤️

"Prepare to be captivated! This daring new novel brings epic adventures, dark apocalyptic challenges, and a thrilling journey from weakness to unstoppable strength. A masterpiece in the making!"

Good book, lots of interesting action and awesome writing quality the author has some good writing technics and abilities, I would like to see this book at the top

Oh my kind of book I love it Waiting for more…