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MD_Sadman
MD_SadmanLv34mth
2024-11-21 23:54

Dear author, you work was good but u have to say your character development is so slow and why did you put chiness cultivation powers ok it's doesn’t matter?why dont you give him a devour ability and i think it will solved everything because it will help your weak as hell mc and it's so disappointing. pls author pls give some good ability ❤️❤️dont giveup author try to develop mc not or not fast❤️❤️😅

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Wruthor
WruthorAuthor

I get you, but it's only been a few weeks since he arrived. He can't just become a god in such a short time. I mean, it has not even been a month. I see the problem. Maybe because I'm showing too many details of his daily life, it's getting harder to read. Is that it? I would love to know.

MD_Sadman
MD_SadmanLv3

yes author, you are right but just give him some ability or devour ability and i think it will be more fun if he has mills Spider-Man ability.It's felling so boring,don’t mind me athour. just give some like that he have to complete some requirement to evolved to get another ability.. 😅

Wruthor:I get you, but it's only been a few weeks since he arrived. He can't just become a god in such a short time. I mean, it has not even been a month. I see the problem. Maybe because I'm showing too many details of his daily life, it's getting harder to read. Is that it? I would love to know.
Wruthor
WruthorAuthor

Don't worry the upcoming chapters may fix that for you and I am making a new Fanfic. I will create a discord if anybody wants to join and suggest stuff there soon.

MD_Sadman:yes author, you are right but just give him some ability or devour ability and i think it will be more fun if he has mills Spider-Man ability.It's felling so boring,don’t mind me athour. just give some like that he have to complete some requirement to evolved to get another ability.. 😅
MD_Sadman
MD_SadmanLv3

i will help you about your next fanfic after my exam end and what about Cosmic Garou it's also op character and use cosmic garou template 😅 and are you gonna drop this your fanfic😅😅..

Wruthor:Don't worry the upcoming chapters may fix that for you and I am making a new Fanfic. I will create a discord if anybody wants to join and suggest stuff there soon.
Wruthor
WruthorAuthor

I'm not lol. Why are people thinking I'm gonna drop it.

MD_Sadman:i will help you about your next fanfic after my exam end and what about Cosmic Garou it's also op character and use cosmic garou template 😅 and are you gonna drop this your fanfic😅😅..
MD_Sadman
MD_SadmanLv3

most of the time people dropped there fanfic.so thats why😅😅

Wruthor:I'm not lol. Why are people thinking I'm gonna drop it.
Bet_subscription
Bet_subscriptionLv1

It hasn't even been a month since he arrived tho?

MD_Sadman
MD_SadmanLv3

after read 15 or 16 chapters it's feels like 100 years is already Pass 😂😅😂

Bet_subscription:It hasn't even been a month since he arrived tho?
Molten_Potato
Molten_PotatoLv4

There are way too many fanfics with devouring ability

MD_Sadman
MD_SadmanLv3

then pls give some suggestion or novels name😅😅

Molten_Potato:There are way too many fanfics with devouring ability
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