Void_eye

Absolute cinema 🙌🙌

Lol another peak 😂😂🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌. I don't wanna spoil cuz it's Absolute cinema. Author cosmic _gear is cooking 🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️

but the author deleted that masterpiece for some reason. i think he will revive that masterpiece 😭😭😭😢😢

Dmn author came back with another masterpiece after DC: Sentry fanfic. Specially I like author action sequence he is great at creating action with his imagination 👍👍. This is also going in the distraction of Masterpiece.

it's definitely deserved it because it's very rare to find this kind of fanfic.

The story starts out great, but don't be fooled. This is one of those stories where the MC has all those "amazing" fights where he is super strong and dominates everyone but in reality nothing changes. No one is killed, the story is not changed. He shows of his power but it all amounts to nothing. For example there is a chapter where the MC acts like he is about to kill two side characters from the original DxD story, only for him to interrupt the final blow 3 times and in between he has all those emotional garbage thoughts and corny good bye wishes ripped from different Disney movies, only to then cancel the final blow altogether because coincidentally someone important to him (who we the reader hear of for the first time) was about to die. Meaning he teleports away for another epic fight with more side characters, but this time he is in a fight that is actually canon, only it is him fighting instead of someone else. So he is also a story parasite and robs someone else's fight or moment. He of course dominates and does much better then the original, but the end is still 100% identical. He "spares" his opponent, because the author is just that trash and thinks this is good writing. It is not... the author and his MC are both impotent and lame. The MC being so powerful only makes it all the more cringe. This is obviously bad, yet the author still went with it. This betrays either insecurity or retardation.

give it try 2 chapter u will like it for sure[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌

Nah bro i will rewrite this and go read my good fanfic where mc have sentry power name is DC:The sentry

Yes.

No, u can see that he use this to read books and create surgeon knife, sheild indicate that how much potential he have now..