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Giga_Weeb
Giga_WeebLv26mth
2024-10-29 21:19

system puppets MC, has awful layout and has an active warped deity manipulating it and him. Basically MC is forced to be a loser (literally permanently obese?) and has no independence. also gets way too many stats from literally in fast food. literally couldn't be worse plot or balance wise. every second sentence is a massive red flag from a writing perspective and the first chapter is a word dump.

Marvel: Player

TranslatorS
2.1
16 Chs

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NightCrown
NightCrownLv14

system slave insecure & fat mc... and he stays fat, don't know ruined it for me.

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The_Paragon_White
The_Paragon_WhiteLv4

Let's just say this story is a total waste of time, the main character literally remains "obese" and can't change even if he trains for the rest of his life because of the system, and women are forced to fall in love with him, like, it's disgusting. It looks a lot like those hentais with loser protagonists who are fat, hairy and disgusting... Anyway, I don't recommend it...

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Ballad
BalladLv5

It's pretty OK I guess...Not really a fan since it's a System Slave type of situation. Emma Frost was I thought to be the main girl but now she's a friend and with Scott it's all just kinda irrelevant.

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antmanFN
antmanFNLv14

Reveal spoiler

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Nerosin
NerosinLv15

System God literally threatened to send Mc to prison with 20 buff rapists if he didn't do what he was told... But hey it's readable I guess.

6mth
batman_3_3_
batman_3_3_Lv4

didn't read this but saw some of the other reviews

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Kyle_Cochrane_3690
Kyle_Cochrane_3690Lv14

If you like this your a weirdo, it’s basically just about a guy being forced to be obese and then being threatened to be gang raped if he doesn’t do whatever the system tells him

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Benoit_Valtin
Benoit_ValtinLv11

I like the idea of starting out in a kitchen, but as soon as it started talking about dungeons, I gave up. It's completely useless, has nothing to do with Marvel and no interest whatsoever. It's a pity there was a good idea, especially the fact of wanting to let him lose weight on his own, which was fun, but no, dungeons in Marvel DC or other universes like that have no interest, they're just a waste of time and words.

6mth
Shnh_Kusuma_3576
Shnh_Kusuma_3576Lv2

The author doesn't seem well We pray for his speedy recovery[img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted]

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