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2024-10-25 20:02

For now all 5 there since I can's judge anything wrong yet(chapter 7) Concept is great I love it. Only negative that I have is that it is in second POV which throws away my immersion a bit, but I can understand why. and I got more used to it now (in the DC the ring story I couldn't really get used to it so I think you did it better than there). Also a tip for in the future I would recomment putting somewhere how long people have to make a choice (just an average is already good). So that they can't complain later when the choises are almost even and then they voted and it changed the result while you already made the next chapter

ATLA - The One Ring

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Sure thing! Thanks for the advice

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I love this concept, I hope you will too. .......................................................................................................................................

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StaidDvours
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We gonna make our host so OP that not even the whole world of Avatar is Gonna stop us 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 this is So Gonna be Peak

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This is just pure fun. Not much else that can be said about it. The concept is uniqe and well executed. I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work.

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Will your story continue until the end of ATLA and end in this series or will it continue until the Legend of Korra series? I really hope it reaches the Legend of Korra since I really wanted Korra to get the MC as a child and grow with him so he could influence her to reach her maximum potential, because from what was shown Korra was the avatar with the greatest potential ever that she bends 3 of the 4 elements naturally while most avatars couldn't figure out that they were avatars until they were 12 when they did that test with the toys and she only couldn't airbend before because she was first physically trapped in the white lotus complex and mentally trapped in the role of avatar, both things that were the fault of white lotus, which is why she was only able to airbend after leaving the complex and losing her other folds since after losing the other 3 folds she thought she had stopped being the avatar, thus freeing herself from her physical and mental prisons, I would really like to see the MC making her become an unstoppable force reaching her full potential with his influence

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Vamos fazer com que nossos anfitriões se sintam pessoas honradas por deus!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Vamo pra cima time!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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