nightsking18

Thanks for the chapter, for the review I am don't completely agree with him since I found you stated if for me quite clearly its just curious how you would balance everything as he gets stronger. Also mabye an Idea for a chapter is reaction to his legend as a pirate from random pirates just to show he is indeed becoming a legend and tails are being shared. And since they are pirates I would expect of tails becoming wilder and weirder.

Nice I often recommend Ark to novels and the one were I didn't used it lol

Just some possible ideas: from ark survival evolved (game), has an specimen implant which basicly is an crafting station for simple things like simple tools, campfires, tents bedrolls, ect that uses raw materials and transforms them into that (if you interperet the game mechanics). Could be usefull for survival in the wilds, One piece, manual for HAKI (mainly observation), devil fruits (upgrade them to remove weakness). The super serum from the boys. An spawner from minecraft where if you put a monster egg in it would spawn that monster (farmeble monsters lol), Hidden blades from assasin's creed for attacks when he doesn't have time to get weapons out of inventory and his main weapons is knocked away,

Nahh if you look at auxillary chapter it was in july 1993 5k points but needed in total like 28k so still 23k points missing at that point so I guess at the end of hogwarts with only natural growth plus points that he would reach it. ofcourse things can happen and he grows faster

Yeah improved quite a bit!

Story just started so for now gave everything 5, but having read authors other books and seeing an upwards trend in his quality in time I am sure this is a banger as the concept itself is already verry interesting to read.

Although 50k magical energy so that would be for now 27429 points

Yeah read the same in the auxillary chapter

Thanks!

Thanks!