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elpepe
elpepeLv26mth
2024-10-24 02:58

I didn't expect anything and it surprised me in a good way, it's a very good translation, I just hope it's not one of those Chinese fanfics that in the middle of the story turns into garbage, please translator, if so, correct the fanfic, I wouldn't mind waiting so you can make the chapters.

This Is Definitely Not Dragon Ball!!

ReidAstrea
4.1
302 Chs

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ReidAstrea
ReidAstreaAuthor

Yes, I did make a few changes in the chapters and I will make sure to remove the poison and brain rot from the fic in the future as well because I absolutely love the concept of this fiction.

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MexicanSavage
MexicanSavageLv14

If you don’t mind me asking how many chapters is the original? Is it still ongoing?

ReidAstrea:Yes, I did make a few changes in the chapters and I will make sure to remove the poison and brain rot from the fic in the future as well because I absolutely love the concept of this fiction.
6mth
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ReidAstrea
ReidAstreaAuthor

it has around 600+ chapters and it is completed I believe.

MexicanSavage:If you don’t mind me asking how many chapters is the original? Is it still ongoing?
6mth
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ReidAstrea
ReidAstreaAuthor

Reveal spoiler

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SalveYing
SalveYingLv12

I like it. I remember reading something similar, but this one is better written. The only thing I don’t really like is that half of the story focuses on forming a harem, even though there aren’t any +18 scenes. Obviously, those scenes aren’t necessary to make a good story, but in a fanfic where the plot revolves around that, it doesn’t make much sense.

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SenatusAlpha
SenatusAlphaLv2

This shit is more peak than KSI's song man. Absolutely loving it 🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️

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R0B
R0BLv2

Translation is good - that's about it. This fanfic is a disguised brainrot. Mc is retard (confirmed by author). It's a dbz fanfic with "catch them all teenagers" mentality. The grooming is f insane. Even characters are cringing at mc actions. Not to mention it has many missed opportunities it's sickening. Ages and timeline are messed up. I don't see the future for this fanfic.

6mth
Zeroren
ZerorenLv3

Honestly, it started okay. It lures you into thinking maybe it would be different, but that just changes after he gets to Earth. It's time to catch them all and start on galactic domination. The translator does a great job—bless him for trying to get this brain rot to us—but no matter, the Chinese filth comes through.

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AmazeAngelo
AmazeAngeloLv4

Reveal spoiler

6mth
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv12

Un fic que se centra casi en su totalidad en harem pero no tiene lemon(? [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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CouchPotatoDandy
CouchPotatoDandyLv5

I've read till chapter 70 and then decided to stop reading it here and just go read the original. Writing quality: the translator is doing an excellent job translating this fanfic and haven't found any mistakes so far. However at Chapter 70 the translator decided he doesn't like all the women the the MC gets (maybe his is jealous, I don't know) so he just removed them from the fanfic. He also said he's going to remove a lot of the romance as well. Since that is the case, the writing quality received two stars. Updating stability: From what I can tell, the translator has been consistent with one chapter a day so five star here. Story development: Quite good till Chapter 70, then I dropped it since the translator has proclaimed he's going to remove a lot of what he deems "unnecessary" for the fanfic. It might have improved the quality or not, I don't know since I dropped it, but I hate it when a translator is getting too meddlesome some, so two stars here. Character design: Same reasons with the story development, in my opinion was quite good till chapter 70 but I don't know if it has changed further than that. Two stars here too. World background: This is a Dragon Ball world fanfic with some changes the original author decided to make, which in my opinion only improved and fixed some of the plot holes the original Dragon Ball had, so five star easy here.

1mth
Lux_Aurion
Lux_AurionLv3

If he arrived at Master Roshi's house earlier than the beginning of Dragon Ball's story, the Immortal Phoenix should be there, and he could gain immortality.

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