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Garland
GarlandLv45mth
2024-11-26 07:47

Despite how interesting its whole story is, execution is completely terrible. The whole story is completely changing and just happens so quick. It goes here, it goes there and just completely abandons pacing. Not enough chapters and suddenly he goes to another world. The MC is also kinda boring and really not that interesting overall.

Is It Wrong to Abusing Cartoon Tropes in Dungeon?

XElenea
4.3
160 Chs

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DaoistOSYUXd
DaoistOSYUXdLv14

I got same problem like he talks about only reaching floor 10 then he's fighting goliath and throughout the whole thing it's cringe lines over and over

3mth
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Yugi_Muto_8488
Yugi_Muto_8488Lv4

Hmm, is this not the same fanfic I once read? [I'm invincible with funny character skills in the dungeon] Invincible Elizabeth sign, Hero creation EX bullsh*t, Grand Assassin Bystander Megumi Kato, and best of all the live commentator who rigs the game. Then he jumps over to FZ with Proto Merlin to prank Altria pretending to be the real King Arthur and by the time Little Garden came is the point this book got dropped bc it completely turned into trash. 700+ chapters but oh well.

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XElenea
XEleneaAuthor

This review is solely intended to inform you, the current readers, and perhaps those who intend to read, that this fan fiction is a translated version of the original and contains the results of my personal editing. My purpose in translating this fan fiction personally is purely out of hobby, and because I am quite interested in this fan fiction. As you may know, fan fiction like this usually contains some unpleasant elements, and from what I have read so far, there is quite a bit of poison and personal bias from the author embedded in it. Nevertheless, do not worry; I will sacrifice and act as a poison tester for all of you and perform editing to remove the poison present in the original version of the fan fiction. So, you do not need to worry if you are hesitant to read this type of fan fiction due to concerns about poison. I will provide an edited version that is free of poison and devoid of the author's personal bias. That is all, and thank you.

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Hocolate
HocolateLv4

Because I got a stern warning, it was difficult for me to give a rating 1 comment, but okay, the author hasn't dropped it as long as the novel continues to be worthy of being rated even if it's only two or three stars Maybe after 100 chapters I will re-rate, because there is no picture of where this novel is going, maybe abandoned or continued until the long hiatus

6mth
HereForGoodRead
HereForGoodReadLv4

This is a translation meaning it’s garbage. Mc is also generic.

5mth
Jaor_Caruel
Jaor_CaruelLv1

Esta bien para pasar el tiempo espero que sigan actualizando aunque sea muy genérico divertido .....,....................................................... .............................................................

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gato_the_cat
gato_the_catLv5

i just want to say one think please don't drop this story or very long Hiatus

5mth
KangTL
KangTLLv1

So far so good don't see any manor problems work it, keep ur jobs done and stay healty and please dont drop this fate fic like before again!

5mth
Baebernumberone
BaebernumberoneLv1

Five stars for this fresh story, unlike anything currently on the market! The use of cartoon elements is really interesting, as no one has explored this theme before. I hope you keep up this amazing work

6mth
Aoki_seino
Aoki_seinoLv4

Author Continue The FATE, AUTHOR CONTINUE ITTTTT

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iixQa
iixQaLv2

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