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GarlandLv43mth
2024-11-25 23:47

Despite how interesting its whole story is, execution is completely terrible. The whole story is completely changing and just happens so quick. It goes here, it goes there and just completely abandons pacing. Not enough chapters and suddenly he goes to another world. The MC is also kinda boring and really not that interesting overall.

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DaoistOSYUXdLv14

I got same problem like he talks about only reaching floor 10 then he's fighting goliath and throughout the whole thing it's cringe lines over and over

Yugi_Muto_8488Lv4

Hmm, is this not the same fanfic I once read? [I'm invincible with funny character skills in the dungeon] Invincible Elizabeth sign, Hero creation EX bullsh*t, Grand Assassin Bystander Megumi Kato, and best of all the live commentator who rigs the game. Then he jumps over to FZ with Proto Merlin to prank Altria pretending to be the real King Arthur and by the time Little Garden came is the point this book got dropped bc it completely turned into trash. 700+ chapters but oh well.

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