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2024-10-18 04:42

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In Naruto World with Infinite Mirror Eyes

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Rain_1
Rain_1Lv1

only 4 chapters? made more of it. and I hope there's no harem on it or like Hinata will be the Love interest

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pussycats
pussycatsLv1

when will the Next Update? I kinda Like the Eyes power.

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Gandalangambag
GandalangambagLv1

I want more😭😭😭😭. why there's only six chapters? you should release it if you have more than 30 chapters so us readers would be satisfied 😭😭

6mth
Omer_Alfarog_Hamza_6265
Omer_Alfarog_Hamza_6265Lv2

I don't understand you're saying in the previous chapter that he won't hide his talents but when the next chapter comes you want him to focus on keeping a low profile . I even noticed repetition in most of the paragraphs. The story is good and the ability is promising. Please reduce the padding and focus on the characters’ interaction. For example, his interaction with the students was very passive and forced and not necessary from what I remember. The class was full of about 60 students. I don’t think they would interact with him quickly. He even used the fire method, but they focused on boxing. It’s not possible. Even Danzo's reaction is that the Uchiha Village is a large village and every year there will be a new batch of students, so he can't focus on it so quickly. In Konoha, there were shinobi who were more talented than the protagonist, and also since you mentioned that the Uchiha haven't been wiped out yet, isn't it possible to focus on them?

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superElite
superEliteLv1

all i can say is amazing! this is one the best fanfic out there. The eyes are unique and new for me.

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Ahmed_Ragab_1983
Ahmed_Ragab_1983Lv1

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