As of chapter ten, I have felt it is quite fast in pace, and I feel like this may be a problem for the story. However, it is seemingly entertaining.
Liked it!
LIKEIt’s fine, I had hope myself that my review wasn’t overly harsh. I suppose that makes but I didn’t quite understand a few aspects of the story like why their demigod behaviour was revealed to them or somethings just felt slightly fast. It could just be how I speed read fanfic messing with some these things though. It’s not truly a problem that detracts from the story for me ultimately.
ok I understand