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2024-11-15 01:28

It’s a good start and keeps the reader engaged. Kieran is unlikable and if it becomes too much revolving around the scheming love rival (Amelia) then it will become boring and cliche. At this point Kieran needs to start redeeming himself and the story will move more in the direction of trials they may face.

Winning My Ex-Wife Back

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The story itself is intriguing. The characters are well written. Grammar & spelling could use a little more polishing/touch ups; but over all, it's a good story that's hard to put down.

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After 9 chapters, this story is going nowhere, I am not invested in any of the characters.

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