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2024-11-15 01:28

It’s a good start and keeps the reader engaged. Kieran is unlikable and if it becomes too much revolving around the scheming love rival (Amelia) then it will become boring and cliche. At this point Kieran needs to start redeeming himself and the story will move more in the direction of trials they may face.

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