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2024-10-26 20:57

This is the peak. It's the best fan fiction I've ever read in my life. A great narrative style, really an incredibly good narrative style. Very fluent pov's. A nice background, good character design, it would be great if there were flashbacks explaining why it was so cold in the future (for example, in the endless wars with the Sith The process of detaching himself from his emotions in order not to fall to the dark side while there were people close to him who were lost, witnessing the atrocities of the Sith for years, finding balance by facing his own emotions when the woman he loved became a Sith and having to kill her, and finally dying by sacrificing himself for the future of the galaxy would be a perfect past life. Force. It would be nice if you could find a reason why he doesn't/can't use his abilities to the fullest. Please don't reduce the quality and leave this masterpiece unfinished.

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