New translation I decided to pick up! It had been awhile that I haven't picked up a new fanfic, so I decided to pick up a Warhammer one. Have fun and enjoy it!

It's well written and the author seems to have a good knowledge of the 40k universe. And the idea of using a hope system in this universe is very interesting.

Stories of Hope and Progress in 40k really gets the blood and patriotism going. Only in the darkest and grimmest world can the bright light of hope shine through. And since it's fanfiction, we won't have that light snuffed out prematurely like we do in normal 40k books. And that's why 40k fanfics are better than the actual books.

the story started very intensely, where each chapter made us impatient to read the rest. Then boom, a bunch of points of view, which frankly we don't really care about and conflicts brought at the wrong time. What I mean is we were on the completion of the first achievement of the mc, then a plot and lots of points of view, come to break the rhythm. on the scale of Warhammer where politics is done on a galactic scale, 60 chapters for no notable achievement, it's frustrating. I don't like to skip lots of chapters while reading, so I gave up. Good luck anyway

Si la historia se desarrolla bien tiene lógica ( dentro de la “lógica" de Warhammer) y no se vuelve repetitiva puede ser un gran momento para ser fan de Warhammer solo tienes que subir los cap seguido y todo va a está bien

I don't know how the future quality of the chapters will be but so fast so good. Warhammer fanfics are always appreciated

Since I don't want to write too much, I will keep it short. This fanfic is really well written, has an interesting development until now (chapter 75) and it might be the best W40k fanfic I have ever read (tbf there are not that many to begin with). What I especially like is that there are several passages about the lives of citizens from time to time. That gives you a really nice sense of immersion. I hope that this story will be written for a long time and that the quality will continue to stay so high. And so much for keeping it short... maybe next time... probably not though.

Seems good so far am on Chapter 9. There is solid detail and practical characters. Eager to see what happens next and hopefully the story has some new things for the sub-genre.

I never thought that I would see a warhammer fanfic done this well. Good story, good charters, good plot, good ‘plot’!!!!!!!! Would recommend!

It's really amazing how good of a translation this is,👍 Not to mention the great story itself. 😄