It's well written and the author seems to have a good knowledge of the 40k universe. And the idea of using a hope system in this universe is very interesting.

Si la historia se desarrolla bien tiene lógica ( dentro de la “lógica" de Warhammer) y no se vuelve repetitiva puede ser un gran momento para ser fan de Warhammer solo tienes que subir los cap seguido y todo va a está bien

Stories of Hope and Progress in 40k really gets the blood and patriotism going. Only in the darkest and grimmest world can the bright light of hope shine through. And since it's fanfiction, we won't have that light snuffed out prematurely like we do in normal 40k books. And that's why 40k fanfics are better than the actual books.

I don't know how the future quality of the chapters will be but so fast so good. Warhammer fanfics are always appreciated

Seems good so far am on Chapter 9. There is solid detail and practical characters. Eager to see what happens next and hopefully the story has some new things for the sub-genre.

It's really amazing how good of a translation this is,👍 Not to mention the great story itself. 😄

Since I don't want to write too much, I will keep it short. This fanfic is really well written, has an interesting development until now (chapter 75) and it might be the best W40k fanfic I have ever read (tbf there are not that many to begin with). What I especially like is that there are several passages about the lives of citizens from time to time. That gives you a really nice sense of immersion. I hope that this story will be written for a long time and that the quality will continue to stay so high. And so much for keeping it short... maybe next time... probably not though.

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