Uhm keeping this shameless author bullshit aside, I will tell you more about this story and It's execution both of them a re really poor when I write I sometimes feel to just shoot a bullet in my head. However, the story is rather a little interesting it is not now but will become in future, specially in the 2nd and 3rd Nightmare. So I will try to keep up my updating and also wish you guys good luck if you can follow me and our main character in the journey.

It's okay for a beginner, but it's too boring and meaningless. First, you could think through the main character's personality and how it fits into the story. He seems like a madman—I know because I've seen madmen—they're inconsistent, just like the main character. And you shouldn't make the same mistakes as the author; a meaningless time skip isn't necessary.