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Spelloyal
SpelloyalLv125mth
2024-11-06 21:44

Writing quality and update stability are 5 stars, but everything else is 1 star. This fic is a complete copy of the canon so far, with one tiny change or another. Reading the first 3 chapters with the fic being basically a retelling of the original story and the fic itself making this clear by repeating several times that the MC is trying hard to maintain the canon is really boring to read. Of course, I understand that it logically makes sense for the MC not to want to take risks and focus on imitating the canon until he gets the cheat, but that doesn't change the fact that it's an extremely boring read and a complete waste of time. The author could have simply skipped this part and started the fic after the MC got the cheat or started the story earlier and made some changes like actually writing the MC's childhood, having him train with a different weapon and discovering his talent, maybe learning sword intent and keeping it hidden or something like that instead of literally starting the fic writing a copy of the canon.

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