Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and every ones opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

It has become a family tradition to fully support Akkikan's work, I do this just because it is a tradition, [img=eksplorasi][img=eksplorasi][img=eksplorasi]

I love this Akikan's new book, it's concept was unique y'all should give it a try. SPOILER: So there are not only one mc, but many at different worlds. There's Masa(mc's name) from One Piece world, there's Masa from Mahouka, and there's Masa from Dxd, and from what i see Akikan planned to add more. Think of them as what if Mc was sent to "this" world. These Masas can share power with each other and use all abilities from other masa. Pretty unique right

akikan40's new story already gets full marks from me. akikan40's new story already gets full marks from me. akikan40's new story already gets full marks from me. akikan40's new story already gets full marks from me.

#akikan40 please one masa from #Tensura world as a demon lord , True dragon or as a Archdaemon 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

Pros: + Updates consistency Cons: - Good premise but poor execution, the interactions between characters were too stiff. You can check the Siscon fanfic, that story has the best interactions between characters. - Monologue, too much monologues! - Almost every monologue paragraph always ends up with ANNOYING 'right? right? right?' - Akikan didn't know much about the original story of One Piece. Like the MC (without Hakis) managed to subdue Moria easily. The MC killed Blueno without taking his DF because Akikan didn't know how OP door-door devil fruit was or he didn't even know that Blueno was a DF user.

I will keep this here until the ending since I can't trust akikan to deliver a good ending anymore.

Is this one of those possessions dojin I've read? the one where fat bro get into the blond girl but this time it's reverse lol

Okey, I do like the story, although I may not agree with some of the stuff the author has done or described in the world of One Piece I can accept this since it is in fact an AU world and not 100% canon, so there is a certain leeway that the author can use to do what he wants. All in all, a good fanfic but keep in mind that there are several things like devil fruits and the powers of others that you may not agree with.

one of my most favorite novel is akikan's chat group. if we compare writing qualty of chat group to whatever shit this novel is like comparing naruto with boku no pico. i think some translation r better than this trash