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TheEvilDragon23
TheEvilDragon23Lv57mth
2024-10-11 00:33

It’s new at the moment and I’ve only read the first few chapters. However, the idea is good and the story is going in a good direction. The author is currently releasing quite a few chapters not sure if the updates will be so often in the future, but I’m hopeful. The only problems I can see so far is mixing up words, grammar, pov. It isn’t to the point of being unreadable, but atleast I have to stop for a second to piece some parts together. If the author improves the grammar etc. this story would be five stars imo.

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Rebel_Royal5
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thank you for the constructive words I will try too fix it but it's on my phone and it automatically corrects certain things

AlexPendragon
AlexPendragonLv10

and a Chinese translation... in the third chapter there were some Chinese kanji (Chinese writing)

Chaimos
ChaimosLv3

Did you find it??

AlexPendragon:and a Chinese translation... in the third chapter there were some Chinese kanji (Chinese writing)
AlexPendragon
AlexPendragonLv10

I didn't even look for it... most Chinese novels about Greek gods are the same, so I didn't read further. You should be able to find it by searching for the Chinese name

Chaimos:Did you find it??
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