either this is a translation or you are heavily influenced by MTL works which isn’t a good thing. it’s pretty clear in writing. i personally dislike it although it is technically readable.

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The story has an interesting MC with a valid reason for doing what he does, he does not become OP because of the system after 5 chapters which is appreciated for the gradual development, he is realistic and takes each action after calculating it, AND THE MOST IMPORTANT THING , the characters in the story are not flat characters who only accept what is happening around them with a simple "ok."

at first, I thought it was a translated mtl but i was wrong. the beginning is so much alike but after reading a few chapters later it was a completely different story. either I am not up to date with mtl novel or the author has been influenced by those mtl novel. anyway it's a good read. if someone find the answer plz link

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Im giving this 5 star, To be honest it is easy to write the dialogue but for the fight and strategy it is diffficult. You need to learn by reading other fiction so you will get the idea how to write fighting scenes Well this book has intense fight but at the same time emotional scenes I know the writer are heavily influenced by chinese fiction. well chinese are around 1 billion people so it is not surprise we are influenced by them. Because among fanfiction they are the most people living on earth that become a writer

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