Ok the novel is good and all with all the character emotions and interactions, It is a very good read for a few people, but not for me because: 1. You have made a setting that Devils can't grow stronger if they train e.g. MC can't increase his total amount of power than he already has he can only learn techniques to better use that power or increase lethality 2. I can not vibe with MC, not understand and stand by his goals and all that and that is breaking my immersion
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eh author is belligerent when it comes to basically anything related to this or even just legit constructive criticism on QQ he basically got to the point of not even reading comments and telling people they didn't understand and that if they don't like it don't read it even when it had nothing to do with what the comment was about honestly sucks cause author is decent but even when he's wrong or someone points out plothole or inconsistencies he just doubles down or becomes argumentative
if half you wrote is true, then you saved my time. thank you
the story is worth a try and to see if you can like the characters and au changes he made it's just not my cup of tea even after giving it a second chance then the authors attitude when it came to feed back even when I pointed out where he made an error and he tried to get into an argument that I was wrong and didn't understand about the training issue most have with his story when my comment wasn't even about I just gave up
It was a great idea , until the ideas started getting out of hand .
the mc is the problem for you?? for me it's makima i do not like her at all i quit reading when the author revealed that she thinks of mc as her pet
nah~ just did waste 2-4 hours of my life. And yep this story is bad, as any that has hypocrite mcs that complain chapters upon chapters like lil b's and "change' their mind and theri life history cause "plot". Alas AU AU AU AU... bad AU, so yeah, ppl complaining about that were right
I'll agree about the au I can't say the story is bad because he's honestly not a bad writer it's sad because so far everything I've read by him is good objectively from a perspective of writing quality but so far his story just seems to have bad plot decisions that just turn people off of the story and he gets overly sensitive when people don't like it or point out legitimate mistakes or how he seems to fall to the I'm the author if I say it makes sense it makes sense without actually making it make sense idk I have him on a list to check in a few years to see if his works gotten better sorry for your wasted time lol
yeah you're right, he writes solid but some choices of the history... (and i was mainly frustated cause of that tbh)
