Item: SAO: Strawberry Bunny
Rating: 5
Author: GlN

GlNLv21mth

2024-11-28 16:48

Its a good story. It doesn't really focus on SAO as much as it does the concept of it. It's mostly world building at the moment, with very few interactions with the main characters. The reason I find this book troubling is because of how complicated it is. The breaks are quite long so when I returned to read it, I had no clue what was going on, so unless I reread everything I'm screwed.

SAO: Strawberry Bunny

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