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Merxix_Perfection
Merxix_PerfectionLv41mth
2024-11-18 13:16

I loved the original story. The world building was pretty good in my memories and I loved the characters. I forgot the name but the best ship is the purple mage with MC. I won't read for now, I will wait for 60-70 chapter before returning because of trauma from other authors who loved to constantly rewrite their stories with less and less chapters produced between each times. I don't know if I just have a bad memory but I also remember that the MC never had a really hard fight where he needed to used all of his arsenal against a truly life threatening enemy outside of the simulations.

Zero Fate Against the World (New Version)

Abadom
4.8
15 Chs

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Merxix_Perfection
Merxix_PerfectionLv4

Like in all of the story I just remember that he took seriously the Lich, the Hero killer monster and the melting forge.

1mth
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Abadom
AbadomAuthor

I'll add more fights in this rewrite, I have already added one if it can even be called that

1mth
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Rak
RakLv5

i hope this time the pacing is much better, i remember i loved it before but then somewhere around chapter 50-60 it got super slow while mc was supposed to be on a time crunch so i put it down to collect. i hope we get even more bloodbourne this time.

3mth

IHaveNoNamingSense
IHaveNoNamingSenseLv4

One of my favorite stories, which I have read four times and was planning to re-read for the fifth time, is getting a rewrite. My god, my life is fulfilled!

3mth
Zone_
Zone_Lv3

One of the best stories I've ever seen, the long chapters, the way the protagonist thinks rationally and is not a no-brainer, the completely original and gigantic world that leaves infinite possibilities among others. The only point that I didn't find good was the lack of better development of the other heroes that seemed like they would happen in the last arc before the rewrite. I will follow this rewrite just as I followed the original. 100/10

3mth
SinnedToHeaven
SinnedToHeavenLv4

what's new this time? anyways I'm looking forward to this masterpiece

3mth
PoPuMa78
PoPuMa78Lv2

Writing quality isn't the best. (just occasion sentence structuring problems or using wrong words like pulling professors from behind the curtains instead of bringing them) but I think it has its own charm. I really love how the author uses the stereotypes from Japanese Isekai novels in a new way (filling the whole book with them). especially how he levels and takes advantage of the system rules. Also, I hope you add something new for us old readers. to keep us in suspense Writing: 4 Stability of Updates: Don't remember from the old book Story development: Godly Character Design: 5 (turned stereotypes into something new and interesting) World Background: 5 (has you thirsting for more)

2mth
Cookie_Gamer_8933
Cookie_Gamer_8933Lv14

While i cant really say anything about the rewrite, because only 2 Chapters are out, the old version was one of my, if not my favorite story and i would highly recommend to atleast try it out.

3mth
BeegBeegYochi
BeegBeegYochiLv4

HOLY MOLY YOU ARE REWRITING IT?! I was just about to begin rereading the old one and then saw the "old version" thingy and my heart skipped a beat. To anyone new that didn't read the og, this is P E A K

2mth
Apollocus
ApollocusLv13

Looking forward to the rewrite the older one had bad pacing in the later chapters. Obviously it wasn't horrendous but it lost the impact it had at first.

21d
LTG
LTGLv15

What is this the 3rd or fourth version of this story i am gonna be honest i have forgotten but its great as always

2mth
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