Review Detail of DiperZ in Another Life In Naruto

Thanks for the review, but the story is focused on the MC’s life, so naturally, it includes descriptions of what the MC does—that’s the point of a life-based narrative. Could I spend more time editing? Sure, but I’m prioritizing speed and using AI to quickly bring my ideas to life. This is all just for fun, not something I’m spending huge amounts of time polishing. Plus, this fanfic will never be pay-to-read, it’s strictly for enjoyment.

You're simply destroying your story, then if you want to write a story seriously, many readers won't give it a chance... Honestly, it's sad, it was a story that could be good, but you're simply discarding it.