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TDSD_1
TDSD_1Lv26mth
2024-10-31 08:07

Each chapter that passes gets worse, the author always chooses the easiest way to solve the problems, and ends up ruining the progression of the story. And what he did with Medusa is basically killing the character and creating a new one with the same appearance and powers. I'm still going to continue reading a few more chapters but I don't have any more expectations.

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Brandon_Hook
Brandon_HookLv13

any improvement in the story since you wrote this?

TDSD_1
TDSD_1Lv2

I saved this story but I haven't read any more chapters since this comment.

Brandon_Hook:any improvement in the story since you wrote this?
DaoistAsura10
DaoistAsura10Lv14

The chinese version is already finished. It's a very rushed ending. He's becoming the strongest in The Great Thousand World very fast. And his Harem are basically almost all girls from both Worlds. I found it rather diappointing.

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