TDSD_1

This chapter makes absolutely no sense.

Pokémon Legend

There's another translation of this story, and I took a look. The chapter order is the same, but the previous chapter in this version is incomplete, while the other one has an extra piece.

I understand what you're trying to do, but it's a little disturbing to me, so it's not for me. But good luck with the story.

So far, chapter 20 isn't bad, above average. It could be improved in several areas, especially the pacing, which felt very rushed, especially after chapter 10 or so. It could also be more detailed, as the story feels a bit empty and rushed. The character development is a bit superficial (including the MC). But in the end, I'll end up abandoning this simply because of the clones; it's not for me (chapter 20, for those who want to know what I'm talking about).

I'm abandoning this. This clone thing, besides being a lazy solution to the harem problem, is at the very least uncomfortable to read, and even disgusting. It's not for me.

So far it's been interesting, a slightly different idea than what is normally used, but it's too early to say if it will work. I just hope the author doesn't create too many OCs, since being a multiverse sooner or later there will be too many characters and it can get out of control, especially with love interests, with many ending up being forgotten or only mentioned as a trophy.

is it an oc world? if not which one?

Is there a love interest? If so, which one? Or is it a harem?

I saved this story but I haven't read any more chapters since this comment.