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2024-11-21 15:06

It's great story, i loved the writing flow, tense of every battle i could feel it, Author has to do a great job describing about this. But, for story devp and other, it's pretty good and i think the star will increase as long as a read more chap of this stories. Keep it up a good work

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Thanks, I really appreciate that

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How shameless of this author to give the story five stars. Still, let me do it because it's my first novel. I wrote it passionately, and I think the story is interesting. 50 chapters in, a new beginning when I decided to go premium —I hope you don't hate me. There are a few things I need to tell you about the book's upcoming event. You can read the free chapters well and hope to find something interesting in them. I can confirm that there is no single filler chapter for free chapters. Everything has a plot and story progression. The battle scene will be divided into two chapters because I pretty much like writing tense moments in battle, including character development for the MC and other chars. You might think that the story will continue to focus on conquering towers until the highest one, but that's not entirely true. There will be other events that I have prepared for afterwards, such as mage tournaments, guild wars, slavery, prostitution, and more. However, that will happen in the upcoming chapters. It's really going to be exciting, you know. In this November, I will try to publish with an average publish chapter >= 3. I'm sorry if I only publish two chapters. Maybe I have other activities that cannot be avoided. However, I will try to publish three chapters daily so you can continue to follow and enjoy my story. For a specific moment, I will do a mass release of 4-5 chapters a day in a specific period to boost my novel in the market. I want you to help me by giving power stones, golden tickets, or gifts, and share it with your friends —I hope some of you will give me a castle xixi >< For those who actively comment, review, or give big gifts, I will let your name become one of the MC's supporting characters. That's my appreciation to you, I hope you like it. It's a bit long that I'm reviewing my story —it's confusing. I hope you can continue to stay with me and accompany me until the end. Cheers.

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