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2024-10-19 10:25

Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.

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You turn. :)

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Quillen_4820, if you have the ability to like my comment, then you have the time to leave a review on my fics.

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How shameless of this author to give the story five stars. Still, let me do it because it's my first novel. I wrote it passionately, and I think the story is interesting. 50 chapters in, a new beginning when I decided to go premium —I hope you don't hate me. There are a few things I need to tell you about the book's upcoming event. You can read the free chapters well and hope to find something interesting in them. I can confirm that there is no single filler chapter for free chapters. Everything has a plot and story progression. The battle scene will be divided into two chapters because I pretty much like writing tense moments in battle, including character development for the MC and other chars. You might think that the story will continue to focus on conquering towers until the highest one, but that's not entirely true. There will be other events that I have prepared for afterwards, such as mage tournaments, guild wars, slavery, prostitution, and more. However, that will happen in the upcoming chapters. It's really going to be exciting, you know. In this November, I will try to publish with an average publish chapter >= 3. I'm sorry if I only publish two chapters. Maybe I have other activities that cannot be avoided. However, I will try to publish three chapters daily so you can continue to follow and enjoy my story. For a specific moment, I will do a mass release of 4-5 chapters a day in a specific period to boost my novel in the market. I want you to help me by giving power stones, golden tickets, or gifts, and share it with your friends —I hope some of you will give me a castle xixi >< For those who actively comment, review, or give big gifts, I will let your name become one of the MC's supporting characters. That's my appreciation to you, I hope you like it. It's a bit long that I'm reviewing my story —it's confusing. I hope you can continue to stay with me and accompany me until the end. Cheers.

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