It started out interesting, albeit with some hiccups in the plot that I could ignore, but after the events of Trihexa began, the story descended into some kind of stupid absurdity. from my point of view, the author should not have created an apocalypse in his home world out of nowhere (it was very a strange decision (I could have simply chalked it up to hallucinations and used it as a springboard for character growth), not to mention the fact that with such a character it was necessary to completely move away from canonical events and develop his story in the setting, like Slash / dog did. Let's add to this empty characters that don't evoke emotions + a strange decision with a child. author if you are reading this then know good stories in There aren't that many dxd settings, and many of them deviate completely from canon so their characters can breathe. and if you want to write something else based on dxd, then I hope you will make a more local story with an emphasis on the folklore of your home country where gg does not become some kind of super deicide, but builds interaction with the environment and grows with those around him
Initially, I had planned for the MC to have another vision similar to a previous one, but I shifted direction to something that better supports the story's ending.
I’ve also come across some plot holes in earlier chapters and found ways to address them that add hopefully interesting stories to the plot.
I enjoy the canon story, which is why the MC participates in canon events, in his own way.
Creating characters who evoke emotional connections with readers is something I’m working on, and it's part of my learning curve as a writer. Including a child as a central character in the MC’s journey was somewhat selfish desire for the MC, it also adds growth to the story.
As I’ve mentioned before, I’m not a fan of revealing future plot points, but I can share that there are upcoming stories that will diverge from DxD’s events. In terms of the MC’s power level, we're now 80 chapters in, and I believe he’s developed his strength in a balanced, reasonable way.
Thank you for the review, if you want to ask any questions I'll try my best to answer and if I didn't address things you wanted address.. Sorry, want a cookie?
