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XAZVAPB0OTH
XAZVAPB0OTHLv42mth
2024-10-12 17:50

a história é meio chata, vendo do ponto de que ela tem a tag (killer), então eu fiquei 11 capítulos esperando o protagonista abusar do [GULA] e comer um reino inteiro ou uma vila inteira, mas é so um cara pagando de Rimuro sem motivo. Falando em motivo, eu acho que a namorada do protagonista não devia ter reencarnado também, ate o capítulo 10, ela ta so existindo. de toda forma, eu esperava algo como um demonio devorador num hentai, entende, algo como sexta-feira 13.

I Became Rimuru In Kuroinu: Fixing A Hentai world

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what translation please

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XAZVAPB0OTH
XAZVAPB0OTHLv4

The story is kind of boring, considering that it has the tag (killer), so I spent 11 chapters waiting for the protagonist to abuse [GLUTY] and eat an entire kingdom or an entire village, but it's just a guy pretending to be Rimuro for no reason. Speaking of reason, I think the protagonist's girlfriend shouldn't have reincarnated either, until chapter 10, she's just existing. Anyway, I expected something like a devouring demon in a hentai, you know, something like Friday the 13th.

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just wait for a bit ok, they are going to do does thing on the up coming ch

XAZVAPB0OTH:The story is kind of boring, considering that it has the tag (killer), so I spent 11 chapters waiting for the protagonist to abuse [GLUTY] and eat an entire kingdom or an entire village, but it's just a guy pretending to be Rimuro for no reason. Speaking of reason, I think the protagonist's girlfriend shouldn't have reincarnated either, until chapter 10, she's just existing. Anyway, I expected something like a devouring demon in a hentai, you know, something like Friday the 13th.
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Naigelton
NaigeltonLv2

its cringe... it just a copy paste of rimurus story but into the kuroinu world.. the mc sounds like ash from pokemon mc is always overly optemistic and author always re uses sentences over and over but just with minor difference ... plot holes everywhere and shit that dont make sense happends but yeah .. i vould not recomend this one to a freind ..

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Garland
GarlandLv4

The Main Issue of the story comes from how it just copies Rimuru's journey with the whole being in a cave, meeting a dragon, a wolf and then even starting with Goblins. It would have been fine if he was still a slime and had all his starting abilities but it just feels like he tries everything to be like Rimuru which overall just dimishes his character. Even the whole nation building isn't really delved into as anything related to it is just placed to the side. All we see are results and never the process. The handling of the cast from Kuroinu also felt very weak in terms of relationship between nations. They all just easily accepted everything. Sure their were some skepticism but it felt just too quick especially with how things are. This is why it would have been better off if the MC started with Orcs instead of just copying Rimuru with the Goblins. At least with them it would have created further proved to Princess Knights how different they are compared to Olga's forces. Overall, the MC is just a Copy of Rimuru down to his starting monster comrades, the nation building is just non existent and the handling of the other characters were pretty bland. It's not bad but it also not good, just average.

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VictorElderblood
VictorElderbloodLv12

it's an interesting story so far so keep up the amazing work

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Bilal_Arshad
Bilal_ArshadLv4

The premise of the story is good: A guy with rimuru's powers and a good sense of justice in the Kuroinu world. But there are many problems: 1. The MC is too shounen MC with dark backstory like, not a real person. 2. The MC's dialogue is very cringe 3. Monsters believe in him without a show of force or any achievements and follow him to attack people they shouldn't even know about 4. The author is too against only men, I want MC to kill a few women as well 5. The author just tries to make MC an exact copy of Rimuru that he forces some plot points to get the powers 6. Great Sage started of as too sentient and became too much like Manas: Ciel 7. I don't think the author knows properly how some skills work

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axel_Garcia
axel_GarciaLv4

this is pretty good a spelling error here and there still good! also folks for some reason chapter 9 and 8 are swapped so read 9 first

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Thor_Ragnarok_8653
Thor_Ragnarok_8653Lv1

Great story so far I hope Kaguya is in the harem

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