Pretty great story here, I like the system, the techniques and rewards, it all fits surprisingly well. The Protagonist being born in Kirigakure is great and his future team is nice too. I have no real complaints, it’s just been a fun, good story.

What’s the original raw??

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I'm not good at giving reviews but I'll still write Good story nothing flashy from the right of the bat, consistency in power scaling he is not op from the start, fairly easy to keep track of all the abilities gained through the system it's not like where he gets all legendary skills and equipment in 2 ten draws, a wonderful read it's shows development which is different from Canon and gives freshness to the story

la historia es bastante buena, se adapta a mi gusto y incorpora elementos externos ( pokemon ) en un historia que conocemos desde otra perspectiva este tipo de fanfics me gustan mucho

estou realmente amando isso! especialmente pelo MC tratar o mundo como real, não como fã vendo seus personagens favoritos e querer estar perto deles e salva-los dos seus destinos trágicos. Sua sobrevivência é a prioridade!

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