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Pretty great story here, I like the system, the techniques and rewards, it all fits surprisingly well. The Protagonist being born in Kirigakure is great and his future team is nice too. I have no real complaints, it’s just been a fun, good story.

I'm not good at giving reviews but I'll still write Good story nothing flashy from the right of the bat, consistency in power scaling he is not op from the start, fairly easy to keep track of all the abilities gained through the system it's not like where he gets all legendary skills and equipment in 2 ten draws, a wonderful read it's shows development which is different from Canon and gives freshness to the story

What’s the original raw??

Considering this is a translation from Chinese; so some of it is literal, it is not the worst but as a born English speaker it sometimes grates; but it isn’t the worst. I like that so far he only has the one Pokémon as a summon and has thoroughly developed his relationship with him. While at current his abilities granted by the lottery system make him around Jonin level, he doesn’t appear as a god-like/broken character. I like how it deviates from the basic plot we know from canon, but given that it is focused on a village we don’t know much about and characters that have a fair bit of room for more depth, the story is very good for a Chinese translated story. It doesn’t mean it’s for everyone, but I personally like it and can’t wait to read more!!

One if not the best Naruto fanfic with its own story along with a great pokemon system.

I think the story is extremely good and engaging. The character development is great and the power is proportionate. I hope the author continues the story. Thanks for the translation.

It’s a pretty good story. Definitely not the best Pokemon or Naruto ff, but regardless it’s an easy read and the writing quality is decent. Keep up the good work author!

my main problem with this is the age of MC. Everything else is great.