[deep blue ,assist me with my math problem]

A good novel, but I have some question one is this your novel or are you translating it? if it is your novel please don’t make him a bloodline wizard It’s a novel about magic and for the love of God please keep him As a normal wizard instead of turning him into a knight disguised as a wizard. You might say he is a wizard with powerful body but this will take from the story because the protagonist doesn’t have to search for ingredients for his potions that will make the story stale and boring and there is nothing else that you can do About it, and it will be more difficult to balance the fight since the protagonist already has a system that that is his Goldfinger and above that he has a powerful body that allow him to jump level without a need for potions or anything like that this will shorten the life of the story instead of that make him search an old ruins or fight creatures or trade of other people for the potion ingredients and this will make the story more colourful and extend the life of the story. If he is self sufficient then he doesn’t need the outside world in another meaning there will be no world building no character interaction no hardship for the protagonist no character building that’s all because you try to feed the protagonist with the golden spoon when he already has a diamond spoon. of course if this isn’t your story, you’re only translating it I wish you all luck.🍀