This review is solely intended to inform you, the current readers, and perhaps those who intend to read, that this fan fiction is a translated version of the original and contains the results of my personal editing. My purpose in translating this fan fiction personally is purely out of hobby, and because I am quite interested in this fan fiction. As you may know, fan fiction like this usually contains some unpleasant elements, and from what I have read so far, there is quite a bit of poison and personal bias from the author embedded in it. Nevertheless, do not worry; I will sacrifice and act as a poison tester for all of you and perform editing to remove the poison present in the original version of the fan fiction. So, you do not need to worry if you are hesitant to read this type of fan fiction due to concerns about poison. I will provide a version that has been edited to be free of poison and devoid of the author's personal bias. That is all, and thank you.

Nice grammar you translated this, not much to say, but I hope you won't drop this because I don't want to lose my brain cells from reading mtl garbage.

Since it's a fate fanfic, 5 stars no drama, I hope you will not drop this novel like the previous one.

It’s peak.

Very good very very very good

This fanfic is very interesting with how it explores the already established characters and brings about changes to the timeline that feel believable. The MC is likeable and stands out with his approach to each character and how his interactions with them change them for the better. The writing of events is PEAK and the action is a sight to behold. When I read this novel, I can't help but compare it to the original and find it lesser. I know this is a work on an established franchise using modern FATE lore, but this novel is the greatest piece of writing I've ever seen. The only official material that I think can even match this story is either Unlimited Blade Works from the Visual Novel or the Seventh Singularity from Fate Grand Order.

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on the 1st chapter found this "It's a New Year's gift for you, and I'm passing a message to the boss on the way." "A message for my grandfather?" "Exactly. He asked me to tell you that the Fujimura group will be very busy for a while. You need to behave while you're home alone and not run around. Also, school starts again after New Year, so don't forget your winter vacation homework." yeah that was confusing, not much but you gonna find this from time to time

IF YOU LIKE FATEFIC THEN YOU MUST READ THIS BECAUSE IT IS GUARANTEED TO BE GOOD AND NOT LIKE THE MARKET FATEFIC ON THIS PLATFORM IF YOU LIKE FATEFIC THEN YOU MUST READ THIS BECAUSE IT IS GUARANTEED TO BE GOOD AND NOT LIKE THE MARKET FATEFIC ON THIS PLATFORM