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Darksiidde
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2024-10-08 23:41

This work to date is a masterpiece. She has consistency and is extremely detailed, something I really appreciate in a writer. Furthermore, an extremely important thing that many leave something to be desired is the psychological "structure" of the characters, something that the Author is putting together very well. This work has immense potential and I hope that the Author does not give up easily on it.

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Deltron_0
Deltron_0Lv3

the author is a female😯

Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv12

and posible Yuri ntr...

ThePrinceRadiant
ThePrinceRadiantAuthor

I'm a man by the way.

Deltron_0:the author is a female😯
ThePrinceRadiant
ThePrinceRadiantAuthor

I'm really curious how the hell you came to the conclusion that it's NTR. I'm really curious, because no matter how much I reread my fanfic, I didn't see any indication of that garbage you mentioned. I'm sincerely curious how you came to such an absurd and baseless conclusion. As for Yuri, I don't know if I'm going to do it, I have no problem with such things.

Haku_Ouroboros:and posible Yuri ntr...
Darksiidde
DarksiiddeLv11

Even I want to know. If it had this rubbish content, I wouldn't even have made this comment. It was just a matter of abandoning it.

ThePrinceRadiant:I'm really curious how the hell you came to the conclusion that it's NTR. I'm really curious, because no matter how much I reread my fanfic, I didn't see any indication of that garbage you mentioned. I'm sincerely curious how you came to such an absurd and baseless conclusion. As for Yuri, I don't know if I'm going to do it, I have no problem with such things.
ThePrinceRadiant
ThePrinceRadiantAuthor

i agree, anyone who reads this kind of thing has a problem in their head

Darksiidde:Even I want to know. If it had this rubbish content, I wouldn't even have made this comment. It was just a matter of abandoning it.
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv12

En los comentarios hay una persona que menciono que no el gustaba el Yuri y te preguntó si pondrías Yuri , no le respondiste e ignoraste su comentario cuando a todos los comentarios les dabas like

ThePrinceRadiant:I'm really curious how the hell you came to the conclusion that it's NTR. I'm really curious, because no matter how much I reread my fanfic, I didn't see any indication of that garbage you mentioned. I'm sincerely curious how you came to such an absurd and baseless conclusion. As for Yuri, I don't know if I'm going to do it, I have no problem with such things.
FinnsRevenge
FinnsRevengeLv4

Haku_Ouroboros:En los comentarios hay una persona que menciono que no el gustaba el Yuri y te preguntó si pondrías Yuri , no le respondiste e ignoraste su comentario cuando a todos los comentarios les dabas like
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv12

FinnsRevenge:
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FinnsRevenge
FinnsRevengeLv4

Ok? You're the one speaking spanish on a fic written in english and in the english section of fics

Haku_Ouroboros:
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Amon91
Amon91Lv5

Don't.

ThePrinceRadiant:I'm really curious how the hell you came to the conclusion that it's NTR. I'm really curious, because no matter how much I reread my fanfic, I didn't see any indication of that garbage you mentioned. I'm sincerely curious how you came to such an absurd and baseless conclusion. As for Yuri, I don't know if I'm going to do it, I have no problem with such things.
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv12

i dont speak school shooting

FinnsRevenge:Ok? You're the one speaking spanish on a fic written in english and in the english section of fics
FinnsRevenge
FinnsRevengeLv4

Then hop on over to your burrito language section you rude monkey. If you're not going to use English here you're better off just not speaking at all.

Haku_Ouroboros:i dont speak school shooting
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv12

✈️ 🏢 🏢 soy de España no México jajaj pero eres un school shooting así que de geografía no sabes mucho jaja

FinnsRevenge:Then hop on over to your burrito language section you rude monkey. If you're not going to use English here you're better off just not speaking at all.
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv12

i dont speak McDonald's

FinnsRevenge:Then hop on over to your burrito language section you rude monkey. If you're not going to use English here you're better off just not speaking at all.
FinnsRevenge
FinnsRevengeLv4

🚉💣? ✈️✈️? ⚽️3-0? jajajajaja huehuehue

Haku_Ouroboros:✈️ 🏢 🏢 soy de España no México jajaj pero eres un school shooting así que de geografía no sabes mucho jaja
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv12

FinnsRevenge:🚉💣? ✈️✈️? ⚽️3-0? jajajajaja huehuehue
FinnsRevenge
FinnsRevengeLv4

Haku_Ouroboros:
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Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv12

jajaja

FinnsRevenge:
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Fat_Elf
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