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Darksiidde
DarksiiddeLv113mth
2024-10-08 23:41

This work to date is a masterpiece. She has consistency and is extremely detailed, something I really appreciate in a writer. Furthermore, an extremely important thing that many leave something to be desired is the psychological "structure" of the characters, something that the Author is putting together very well. This work has immense potential and I hope that the Author does not give up easily on it.

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Deltron_0
Deltron_0Lv3

the author is a female馃槸

Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv11

and posible Yuri ntr...

ThePrinceRadiant
ThePrinceRadiantAuthor

I'm a man by the way.

Deltron_0:the author is a female馃槸
ThePrinceRadiant
ThePrinceRadiantAuthor

I'm really curious how the hell you came to the conclusion that it's NTR. I'm really curious, because no matter how much I reread my fanfic, I didn't see any indication of that garbage you mentioned. I'm sincerely curious how you came to such an absurd and baseless conclusion. As for Yuri, I don't know if I'm going to do it, I have no problem with such things.

Haku_Ouroboros:and posible Yuri ntr...
Darksiidde
DarksiiddeLv11

Even I want to know. If it had this rubbish content, I wouldn't even have made this comment. It was just a matter of abandoning it.

ThePrinceRadiant:I'm really curious how the hell you came to the conclusion that it's NTR. I'm really curious, because no matter how much I reread my fanfic, I didn't see any indication of that garbage you mentioned. I'm sincerely curious how you came to such an absurd and baseless conclusion. As for Yuri, I don't know if I'm going to do it, I have no problem with such things.
ThePrinceRadiant
ThePrinceRadiantAuthor

i agree, anyone who reads this kind of thing has a problem in their head

Darksiidde:Even I want to know. If it had this rubbish content, I wouldn't even have made this comment. It was just a matter of abandoning it.
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv11

En los comentarios hay una persona que menciono que no el gustaba el Yuri y te pregunt贸 si pondr铆as Yuri , no le respondiste e ignoraste su comentario cuando a todos los comentarios les dabas like

ThePrinceRadiant:I'm really curious how the hell you came to the conclusion that it's NTR. I'm really curious, because no matter how much I reread my fanfic, I didn't see any indication of that garbage you mentioned. I'm sincerely curious how you came to such an absurd and baseless conclusion. As for Yuri, I don't know if I'm going to do it, I have no problem with such things.
FinnsRevenge
FinnsRevengeLv4

Haku_Ouroboros:En los comentarios hay una persona que menciono que no el gustaba el Yuri y te pregunt贸 si pondr铆as Yuri , no le respondiste e ignoraste su comentario cuando a todos los comentarios les dabas like
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv11

FinnsRevenge:
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FinnsRevenge
FinnsRevengeLv4

Ok? You're the one speaking spanish on a fic written in english and in the english section of fics

Haku_Ouroboros:
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Amon91
Amon91Lv4

Don't.

ThePrinceRadiant:I'm really curious how the hell you came to the conclusion that it's NTR. I'm really curious, because no matter how much I reread my fanfic, I didn't see any indication of that garbage you mentioned. I'm sincerely curious how you came to such an absurd and baseless conclusion. As for Yuri, I don't know if I'm going to do it, I have no problem with such things.
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv11

i dont speak school shooting

FinnsRevenge:Ok? You're the one speaking spanish on a fic written in english and in the english section of fics
FinnsRevenge
FinnsRevengeLv4

Then hop on over to your burrito language section you rude monkey. If you're not going to use English here you're better off just not speaking at all.

Haku_Ouroboros:i dont speak school shooting
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv11

鉁堬笍 馃彚 馃彚 soy de Espa帽a no M茅xico jajaj pero eres un school shooting as铆 que de geograf铆a no sabes mucho jaja

FinnsRevenge:Then hop on over to your burrito language section you rude monkey. If you're not going to use English here you're better off just not speaking at all.
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv11

i dont speak McDonald's

FinnsRevenge:Then hop on over to your burrito language section you rude monkey. If you're not going to use English here you're better off just not speaking at all.
FinnsRevenge
FinnsRevengeLv4

馃殙馃挘? 鉁堬笍鉁堬笍? 鈿斤笍3-0? jajajajaja huehuehue

Haku_Ouroboros:鉁堬笍 馃彚 馃彚 soy de Espa帽a no M茅xico jajaj pero eres un school shooting as铆 que de geograf铆a no sabes mucho jaja
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv11

FinnsRevenge:馃殙馃挘? 鉁堬笍鉁堬笍? 鈿斤笍3-0? jajajajaja huehuehue
FinnsRevenge
FinnsRevengeLv4

Haku_Ouroboros:
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Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv11

jajaja

FinnsRevenge:
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Fat_Elf
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