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Defective_Angel
Defective_AngelLv146mth
2024-10-04 16:32

just first chapter alone already interesting, BUT... from 2nd until 17th chapter everything became boring, zero comedy, and pure yapping AKA word count......

Naruto: Uchiha Madara's Cousin

Rashta
4.6
152 Chs

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Rashta
RashtaAuthor

honestly its getting interesting around chapter 30+, where the main plot really begin

6mth
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Defective_Angel
Defective_AngelLv14

oohh then Im looking forward to seeing that day comes, Mr author

Rashta:honestly its getting interesting around chapter 30+, where the main plot really begin
6mth
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Ashborn1609
Ashborn1609Lv4

romance? if yes single FL or harem(more than one girl for Mc)?

Rashta:honestly its getting interesting around chapter 30+, where the main plot really begin
5mth
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Anitimesc
AnitimescLv15

Why would he not want the system to activate ?

5mth
Anitimesc
AnitimescLv15

Also will there be any romance will the MC have a waifu?

5mth
Defective_Angel
Defective_AngelLv14

yes, at least should be both Hinata and Ino

Anitimesc:Also will there be any romance will the MC have a waifu?
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Iceling
IcelingLv14

Getting a system is like playing Gacha. There are some really weird systems and some that turn you into a slave. 👀

Anitimesc:Why would he not want the system to activate ?
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Koriison
KoriisonLv4

I found this, while seemingly entertaining for the first few chapters, somewhat of a let down due to Gin not having a solid mentality, he had this power, it was taken away, apparently, and now he goes back, accepts his fate, and decides to almost not do anything, other than pull gacha and live his life away, from what I’ve seen

3mth
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BindgeBindge
BindgeBindgeLv4

pretty good so far. The author hasn't groomed small children so far, so it's above average for a chinese ff

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Keyaruga_Tsuki
Keyaruga_TsukiLv4

this story can only be described in 2 words. "Annoyingly comedic".I didn't think I could see a war be turned into a comedy and I kept reading for God knows why? Cause I do hate comedy.At first it wasn't terrible but when u start to change things and make stupid choices just to have comedic timing it annoys me.This story is good and could've been great but man you're comedy hasn't made me smile or laugh not 1 time.Youd be grateful if you could even catch a semblance of plot behind all that comedy.

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Fanfic_Lover_3597
Fanfic_Lover_3597Lv4

A very good and different story content. Waiting for many more chapters. It's too engrossing please release more chapters ASAP.

6mth
rez_asgari
rez_asgariLv1

till now its pretty good ... .......................................................................................................... ......................

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hunters30
hunters30Lv4

Quite a poor story overall. The focus of the story shifted entirely from the original start. Also seemed like a system story but now it has shifted completely. Comedic element is completely gone but may come back later. There is plot within plot within plot. And several chapters almost seem like fillers from anime. The story idea is not bad but things have been dragged out too much. So it is not a bad story but it is also not fun to read

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MoeruJ
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DaoistrAaNuR
DaoistrAaNuRLv4

Overall i'd say its meh. It's a read that's good for killing time. Nothing amazing nothing overly bad. It has some funny moments.

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Perseus_Peverell
Perseus_PeverellLv1

Just finished reading this in a single sitting, took me 2 days but was worth the read, The summary makes the story look shitty, but the lightheartedness the backstory, the portrayal of the Uchihas, and the other warring states clans have been very fun to read. The MC's backstory was a fun little mystery and the interactions and the system usage is pretty fun. Doesnot make the MC OP. I had a smile throughout the reading montage. Keep up the good work. Have read all the Naruto fics in your account.

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