author overall, I noticed some mistakes in your novel, but even then it's really good. I've noticed some spelling mistakes here and there, although the main problem I've had with this book is that it goes over the top when it comes to explaining what happens inside the classes, even though it could easily be explained in a couple of sentences at most. when it comes to that it feels like the author is trying to find something to talk about but doesn't have the imagination to do so. even then, pretty good novel, I would suggest reading for at least the first Arc (16 chapters)

the important thing while writing is that you enjoy it yourself too ? if yes then that is okay even if your novel isn't good, even if the story sucks, if you are satisfied with it then it is good don't pay attention to others, don't listen to others, just write whatever you think it is good, whatever your heart is saying to you as long that you enjoy it yourself .... then it is good 😁

Well it's definitely the author's first work, I can tell. I do applaud you wholeheartedly for actually sticking to the story and actually following an upload schedule. Well with that out of the way, I would like to offer some suggestions. The grammar itself isn't the worst. Obviously there are mistakes here and there (mainly about punctuation and sentence structure) but that's about the average quality you can find on webnovel so I wouldn't fault you. You are writing in first person POV which is really good for a character driven writing style, but the problem is that you need to include more descriptive language into your writing to make us engaged with the story as well as adhering to 'show don't tell' thing. You see, humans have 5 senses, but you only describe what the mc sees and exclude hearing and smelling completely which otherwise could have helped in making your world feel alive (here you can also use metaphors and comparisons like many authors do). You should also include more internal monologues so that at the very least make him somewhat entertaining to read, as well as slow down the pace a bit to make actions feel natural.

doesn't really matter what people say as long as you want to write just have fun and do this as a hobby Don't ask for opinions on how you should write your next chapters Just follow what your heart says this is your novel, be sure to enjoy this process of writing it. but most importanly is just to have fun while you write it

just write as you wish you don't have to care what other say I mean it's your first novel ... just earn some exp

My guy, I really hope, you change the cover page, the story is good but the cover page isn't, i even skipped this book when I came across it due to the cover page. So as a reader, i hope you fix this issue, because trust me, i know how it feels when you work hard and most of the people don't even reach out to you... good regards ☺️

I am initially giving you 5 stars for motivation after reading about 2 chapters. I have read "Revenge insanity" twice and am thinking to start it again. Now, I am reading "I am the fated villain.". I have tried many novels that suit my test, but they all have disappointed me after reading about 100 chapters. I will give it a try after you finish at least 100 chapters. I hope you will not disappoint me. Good Luck. [img=recommend]

I have only read about three chapters, but things are building up quite nicely, maybe when I have read more I might change my mind. You could get a bit more creative when describing certain actions and the surroundings of your world.

really good really good, i enjoyed it an done question author .... what you did learn from our great love immortal venerable ? what about our great love immortal venerable lessons ? where are there ? I'm sure the art of being shameless was a main part of his lessons, and here you are, not giving yourself a five star review sigh.... please correct yourself on that, be more shameless, because that is the way to the great love this is a part of our great love immortal venerable's lessons