I'm almost 95% sure this is a chinese story and if thats the case, put the link and say it as well instead of saying it's your own work -----------------------------------

nothing that interesting, after all if copying other kekkei genkai were so easy, Orochimaru wouldn't have to research so much, and to tell the truth an Uchiha who lived in Madara's period being so "weak" at 17 years old is even a bit pathetic

I tried to give this fanfic chance because your FS fanfic are very good, however this story is quite boring and I dont really understand his golden finger. Maybe other people like this novel but not me. Im sorry.

This is best Translation and best Uchiha reincarnation fic I've read in years. I've been hooked every chapter so far, and it's got 40 chapters posted at this moment. I have not been this excited about a Naruto fic in years.

The lexicon is good and the story interesting. please keep it up

A Harem isn't two girls it's three or more

The writing is mid. It's not bad in any respect, just very bland. Much of the setting and locations just get the generic descriptions. The character is just an unknown. We don't really know all his capabilities prior to a fight, so everything feels like plot armor, because he learned everything off-screen. The reader, not knqojnv his capabilities make all the fights feel very contrived, and the more we learn, the more o.p he becomes. It starts to feel very much like a "wish fulfillment" story in disguise. The story is a fanfic so no real grading deserved here. With all that above said, there are problems that become readily apparent in chapter 13. Namely the continuity issue with Obito. It is mentioned that Obito was sent on a mission to the bridge where he supposedly "dies" our Mc tried to get assigned as a swap for Obito during this, but it fails. Based on the conversations this mission had yet to conclude and the events of the mission have yet to happen. And then suddenly a few chapters later, we have a "Madara" sighting. AFAIK this CANNOT, be the actual Madara as he is stuck. and based on context of the scene it seems to be Obito, which contradicts the time-frame of the timeline. Furthermore, the timeline is POST third ninja war, when Obito's mission to the bridge was DURING the war. The more I dig into this facet, the more the story unravels. Fix the continuity and I'll update my review. It can be fixed easily, by changing the conversation the Mc has with the fourth hokage, to instead be one with the Third, who was the acting Hokage when Obito was assigned the mission and died. Furthermore, the fourths conversation about the kanabi Bridge mission, was done in a "jovial" tone. Completely at odds with the fact two of his students died on that mission, which by context, further supports my claim that the author is unaware the events should have already passed at this point in time.

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