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GoodorbadLv45mth
2024-11-03 11:33

Will great novel but I think I will stop here not because the novel was bad its just that I don’t like where the MC like to befriend the original MC it just makes the novel seem not fun I wish the mc to be alone and start his own life instead of wasting his time with the main casting.

Academy's Extra:The APEX LEGACY

The_Eminence1326
4.5
126 Chs

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The_Eminence1326
The_Eminence1326Author

Buddy just wait for the upcoming chapters.I never said that he will always follow original mc. There is a reason why he is like this. It will reveal in the upcoming chapters.

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Achillios
AchilliosLv15

I shall let this series cook for a while then.

The_Eminence1326:Buddy just wait for the upcoming chapters.I never said that he will always follow original mc. There is a reason why he is like this. It will reveal in the upcoming chapters.
4mth
The_Eminence1326
The_Eminence1326Author

Yes 👍

Achillios:I shall let this series cook for a while then.
4mth
Ankit_Bhanot
Ankit_BhanotLv13

I shall put this book my library and wait till it has atleast 50 chapters to give it a try..

4mth
2Gud2BTrue
2Gud2BTrueLv3

Oh my gosh, I love this novel too! I just started writing, and I desperately need feedback on mine. Could you please take a look at it? It's called The Cruel Horizon. Plssss

Ankit_Bhanot:I shall put this book my library and wait till it has atleast 50 chapters to give it a try..
3mth
Noah_Ashbourne_3206
Noah_Ashbourne_3206Lv12

I’ll check it out

2Gud2BTrue:Oh my gosh, I love this novel too! I just started writing, and I desperately need feedback on mine. Could you please take a look at it? It's called The Cruel Horizon. Plssss
3mth
Abhi_Axe
Abhi_AxeLv13

how is the romance part?

The_Eminence1326:Yes 👍
3mth
The_Eminence1326
The_Eminence1326Author

It will be mid paced I think. Though I haven't even introduced fl yet.

Abhi_Axe:how is the romance part?
3mth
Abhi_Axe
Abhi_AxeLv13

single FL or Harem?

The_Eminence1326:It will be mid paced I think. Though I haven't even introduced fl yet.
3mth
The_Eminence1326
The_Eminence1326Author

Single Fl

Abhi_Axe:single FL or Harem?
3mth
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Abhi_Axe
Abhi_AxeLv13

thanks for the instance reply

The_Eminence1326:Single Fl
3mth
Jinx_T_Plattytops
Jinx_T_PlattytopsLv4

Please Fix the Novel .

2mth
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Karanvir_Chauhan
Karanvir_ChauhanLv15

This was on the right track, but something has happened since chapter 78. They’re all incomplete chapters after that (for almost a month now). The author needs to look into this.

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Adnan_1
Adnan_1Lv4

Now I am at chapter 77, and the story is really good with fewer and fewer edits needed (though there are still some issues with coherence, but it's manageable and I didn't reread to see if the author has edited the first chapter). However, I have a question for the author: why don't you reread before publishing? The more you read, the more you'll notice repeated paragraphs within the same chapter. For example, in chapter 78 and beyond, there are instances where only two sentences are repeated over and over again so there are chapter with only two sentences.

2mth
DaoistqOt9Ww
DaoistqOt9WwLv10

You say you are a beginner writer? Don't joke, a beginner writer can't possibly write a story where each chapter gets better and more interesting.

3mth
Mayur_Gowda_2925
Mayur_Gowda_2925Lv3

The novels really good The writing quality story development are all good But author bro can u plz edit those chapters It’s irritating to wait for a new chapters just to see it has nothing but repetitive paras

2mth
Arcturus_Sirius
Arcturus_SiriusLv4

The writing quality, at least for the first few chapters, is bad. Sometimes, the author doesn't put spaces after a period or comma. There are either words that are unnecessary or missing in a sentence, and the I aren't capitalized most of the time. Overall, the grammar isn't that. Though the plot seems interesting.

3mth
Kid_Skull
Kid_SkullLv1

no harem ruined it for me , some stories need a little spice because I think romance is one of the biggest fact that makes these novels good as there a lot of novels that are exactly like this , if it was a more entertaining story I don't see no harem as an issue

3mth
KevinZ
KevinZLv14

You have discord? The writing is improving in each chapter! Nice job.

3mth
prince_kumar_0155
prince_kumar_0155Lv3

This novel is a gem i really like this novel author the story and characters so far are really amazing. i just hope the uploads remain consistent. And one more thing Please make it harem as there are not many novel on this app where mc is an extra with an harem troupe. i don't know why but there are only single female lead and I am sock of reading those. so far the story is interesting.😁 Good work author thanks for the novel 👍.

3mth
deathAuthur
deathAuthurLv1

Hi i hope you don't drop this story i really like it i will support you as much as I can So please keep writing this story And dont drop it...................

4mth
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