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LastGodLv56mth
2024-09-27 13:25

pretty good but the problem is unedited ai leaves holes. like that fight scene that ended when tombstone ( i have no idea how bruce knew his name) just passed out for no reason. Then batman isnt stoic enuf nor is he showing any detective work nor is he showing his emotion mastery by saying his heart is pounding ect.

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Cyber_Tom67
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I just reread chapter that part in ch 12, but Batman never calls Tombstone “Tombstone”. Secondly, as for Tombstone falling unconscious he was in the middle of divulging information on scarecrow. My take was that scarecrow knocked him out remotely but I can see your point. The author should have been less vague if that was his intention.

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