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Recovery_9251
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2024-10-05 09:51

Honestly, I'm not a review type of person. In fact, I don't even comment much, but I've read thirty chapters so far I'm just confused by the lack of traction. It starts of slow and relaxed in the first few chapters, with hints of battles and honestly, I thought that's how it's gonna be, but by the thirtieth chapter, all I can say is that the wait was damn worth it. Three battles back-to-back and damn, none of them missed. But these cliffhangers man... Anyways, as for the review. Well, I don't usually do these things, I think I said that before. But aight, well, I've read much more than the one hundred and forty-five books my profile says I've read, and honestly, from a slightly experienced reader's standpoint, the quality of writing in this book is above-average, I can give the author that much. Since the first two chapters, it's always been two chapters a day. There were also a couple days that had four chaps published which was more than appreciated. Simply saying that the story is developed well might be downplaying it, but yeah, it's been developing well. As for character design, Seth is so far, the most intriguing character, but though we can view the protagonist's thoughts, Anon, he still remains the most complex out of the characters revealed. The secondary characters are more than just fleshed-out. They almost seem as individuals within another world. This's the best way to describe it, the author is showing us a world, and we're viewing this world. Like any other world, there're individuals within it. Obviously, the characters feel like genuine individuals when the author is taking this approach. As for the world background, after stepping into this expecting some type of post-apocalyptic world of ruins, I was quite surprised by what I had stumbled across, but then again, with how hyped up "that man" is, I guess it's to be expected. But there's that underlying tone that the current society might be even darker than it is... well, it could just be me digging too much into it. And that's that. All I can ask is for Mr. Author to take his/her time and complete this.

Myriad Devils

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143 Chs

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Six3
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Well, hello there! Though it hasn't been published just yet, I've waited until completing the first act before writing this review. Now, how should I go about this? I’ll keep it short and sweet. I loved to read. I've explored many so-called masterpieces, and naturally, I've run out of intriguing options. What's left often doesn't pique my interest. You might see the "villain" tag and think, "Another cringy book." I can't claim it won't be cringy—there are no absolutes in this world, so I don't dare say I can write a villain without some finding him edgy in some way. Yet, I am confident in my ability to express the dispositions of our leads in a way that's deserving of them. Whether you enjoy evil protagonists, antiheroes, or righteous characters—magic or cultivation, sci-fi or romance—I suggest giving this book a chance. If you find yourself troubled by something, please let me know. And if you’re a fan of harems, I apologize in advance, but please… wait! You might have already left, but if you’re still here, I hope you’ll consider giving this book a chance. Who knows? It might be the exception. I trust you'll invest some time in it and, in return, stumble upon the foreign world within these chapters. I wish you a great day and coming days. Thank you!

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in chapter 8, I got caught up in feels, so I was like, let me forge up another motivational quote. Anyways, this is a review, so lemme review... I've only read 8 chapters so u might think that I don't have the credibility to review, but if I'm wrong, I'll come delete this review. but for me, it's quite obvious that this book is well thought of and probably wouldn't be dropped. there's a feeling of, I dony know how to describe it, like a budding masterpiece... ah, potential, there's potential in this book... now, time for motivation. potential... all of us have potential, it is in us, waiting to be discovered. to discover it, ur can't if ur don't believe in urself. if ur give up, if ur make excuses, ur could never unearth that potential. some people's potential is soo expansive that by doing the bare minimum they can still be considered as true talents, but to revolutionize a field, u need to unearth all of your potential. it can't be done if you make excuses. find urself... most importantly, when u think that ur can't make it, ur can't go on any more, I'm telling you, u probably can. don't let your demons win, be more vile than those demons, come out on top, stand tall, stand proud.

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I've not felt like this reading a book in a while now so keep it up you will have my support once you don't drop

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author, just continue to upload please. don't stop, don't stop, don't stop. I've seen too much books with potential just fall off, but this is too good. If this also enters hiatus or gets dropped, then I'll just stop reading "ongoing" books completely. do it for me

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I’ve thoroughly enjoyed reading it so far! You have my complete support; just keep publishing more. I can’t wait to see what happens next!

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I do believe I've stumbled upon a hidden gem. the other reviews basically say everything, all imma say is that it's really good

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