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darren_burns
darren_burnsLv106mth
2024-10-04 05:53

While it is very good as a god should he not possess a Godly body attributes such as super strength etc ? Technically as the God of the Sky he could have a home in the sky but it would require him to learn to build a home worthy of a God. I believe he has vast potential with his divinities and I hope he pushes them to the limit while being creative on ways to use them. Overall however fantastic job may Jaxon & Leah remain together for eternity.

Twilight: Gods among us

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Dao_Of_Shamelessnz
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thank, you ill try to envision properly with words. I'm still a noobie and if Ur talking about why he's acting weak with Leah?, i wanted him to make her feel empowered. cos he does have a godly body look in the info chap

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Tanto potencial desperdiçado, não tem nenhum desenvolvimento de personagem, a história é extremamente confusa com coisas aleatórias jogadas de lado sinceramente decepcionante

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I haven’t really read the book yet just read the synopsis and saw the part “after surviving a school shooting a young victim wakes up in the world of Twilight” I think he just died, got shot went unconscious apparently in twilight now, yeah probably died { Don’t mind the review it just wouldn’t let me post otherwise}

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The grammar is great, and the story premise is good. The introduction felt a bit shaky, but Jaxon feels like a person with his own independent thoughts thankfully. No angst/unnecessary, so that's already great.

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For a noob writer , you did amazing . However i do wish you spend less time on the music . But that’s just my opinion. The only thing you need to work on, is your update stability. I would have gave you 2 stars on that rating . But it seems like your pretty young and living with your mom. That’s what it seems. So we all know how things goes when you’re that young.

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Eagerly awaiting for more from you, author👍 . . . .

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