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2024-09-23 08:26

Well here we go again. I've editted it to pretty much perfection but there still can be mistakes so make sure to leave your comments! And before anyone asks for the raw here it is: 原神恶人模拟器,我是她们的公敌? Author Name: 孟小花不是花 If you got any questions ask away!

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Vallandres
VallandresLv4

I hope you can translate this until the end, and maybe you edit some of the simulations a bit (only the bad one)? The story is not that bad actually, it's good, I've already reviewed it for you.

_Nia
_NiaAuthor

I feel like they're a essential part of the story as the title itself is villain simulator xD But which simulations you think needs edit?

Vallandres:I hope you can translate this until the end, and maybe you edit some of the simulations a bit (only the bad one)? The story is not that bad actually, it's good, I've already reviewed it for you.
Vallandres
VallandresLv4

Barbara simulation, other than that, I think I could still handle it, cuz it's only just a few of it.

_Nia:I feel like they're a essential part of the story as the title itself is villain simulator xD But which simulations you think needs edit?
Pengamat_Ketiga
Pengamat_KetigaLv3

did you add lemon?...

_Nia
_NiaAuthor

not yet I dont feel like adding lemons in simulator scenes cuz they are not genuine ones Maybe I'll do it when it happens in his real life

Pengamat_Ketiga:did you add lemon?...
Pengamat_Ketiga
Pengamat_KetigaLv3

I like the idea, this could be a sign that the MC will conquer the Heroine in real life....and if not, I feel like ¼ of this story will be filled with lemons....not that I hate it, I still like lemons but in the right size.

_Nia:not yet I dont feel like adding lemons in simulator scenes cuz they are not genuine ones Maybe I'll do it when it happens in his real life
Master_Celestial
Master_CelestialLv4

Thank you for the translation.

_Nia
_NiaAuthor

ohh it's you! long time no see

Master_Celestial:Thank you for the translation.
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Master_Celestial
Master_CelestialLv4

I'm surprised you remember me

_Nia:ohh it's you! long time no see
_Nia
_NiaAuthor

Haha I remember most of my old readers

Master_Celestial:I'm surprised you remember me
doomslayer24
doomslayer24Lv4

discord link is expired. send out new link

Canele
CaneleLv14

Please remove the game card one on the latter parts... It doesn't add anything to this novel... Also, the ending is too abrupt

_Nia
_NiaAuthor

Alright, I'll see what can I do to make it better

Canele:Please remove the game card one on the latter parts... It doesn't add anything to this novel... Also, the ending is too abrupt
Croleoly
CroleolyLv12

I see genshin with harem tag, I read

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Daoist_Kaito
Daoist_KaitoModerator

First off, the translation is great—there are some minor mistakes here and there, but they can easily be ignored. There's almost no poison, and if there is, it doesn't ruin the immersion; in fact, it feels like it belongs in the plot. The characters are somewhat fleshed out, each with their own aspects and personalities, which keeps them from feeling bland and enhances their interactions. As for pacing, I can say it’s balanced for now, though I can't comment on future chapters (17 are out as of this review). I believe it will maintain a good balance between the reality the MC is in and the simulations he’s experiencing. Regarding update stability, that's a point of concern. Unless I personally remind the translator (which I definitely won't do by spamming her on the Discord server or in her DMs), I might be left waiting for new chapters after weeks of no releases. However, I think she'll focus more on this one compared to Time Emperor from my conversation with Nia. In terms of plot, there isn’t much to go on regarding the reality the MC inhabits, but there are some intriguing elements, especially in the simulations. Each simulation has its own unique story and might even outshine the original reality. The current simulation the MC is in has been the best so far (read the story to find out—no spoilers here). Overall, with this review, albeit half-hearted by my standards for critiquing fanfics and novels, I can certainly say that I highly recommend this book. Take this review with a grain of salt; your experience may differ from my expectations. I suggest reading the first 10 chapters to see if you like it. If you do, be sure to tell Nia to release more chapters, or Kaito might leak the group chat.

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